Beautiful! Esp the twist at the end!
dhanyawad! yaar tum logon ke bina meri hindi ki puri "durgati" hoti ja rahi hai! mere aas-paas koi nahi hindi bolne wala!niralee solanki misses savio pashana, disha kapadia, skand bhupendra, radhika rani, ryan fernandes!
i really like the way it ends... this is exactly what a triveni has (although this isnt a triveni)... i suggest write a bit of triveni)... and pls re-post this in the devnagri script... moreover, you dont need to miss me... 'm just a thought away...Love,
Nice one.You have a great control over Hindi too...
i had not read the last two lines.. or i did and maybe i dont remember.. wow..
damn nice... :)
Wah! Kya adaa hai... bakayada Niralee :)